REVIEW OF THE ‘KINDRED’
BY ALPNA DAS SHARMA
Writing a story within
the parameters of a writing contest on a specified theme is a challenge unto
itself. Dr Alpna Das Sharma, however, has met the challenge with a fair amount
of individual and original creativity. The plot is credible and contemporary
with ample scope for an emotions-rich narrative. The first-person narrator
Anish reaches the depth of his family secret by retracing the path to the
origin of his dilemma beginning 5 years ago and haunting him relentlessly all
those years.
The mandatory 5
characters Alpna has evolved in the story are the narrator’s elder sister Anya,
his parents, the house-keeper at their ancestral home, doctors at the surrogacy
clinic, salesman at the bakery, manager of the orphanage and, of course, his
twin sister Anamika. The delineation of these characters is objective, unbiased
and realistic. His parents are representatives of a generation of post-independence
Indians who moved from small towns to metros in search of their dreams and made
it big. His reclusive but artistically talented sister Anya with her cynical
and sinister sense of humour is the stereotypical representative of the global generation
of disillusioned youth – questioning, questing and quarrelsome. Being a
conscious party to the family secret of her parents’ decision to beget an
offspring through surrogacy has hurt and embittered Anya deeply to shape her
into an individual that she is. Her embitterment gets further intensified when
her parents abandon the girl child begotten as a twin sibling in their surrogacy
venture. In my assessment, she is the most authentic and realistic character in
the story.
The resolution of a
family secret and the author’s plot ends on a positive note. The reunion of
separated twin siblings results in a deeper bonding between the two. The
psycho-emotional dilemmas tormenting all the characters in the story are decisively
resolved.
Dr Alpna Das Sharma has
succeeded in convincing me that there is a real ‘Kindred Café’ in the outskirts
of Mussoorie run by partially identical twins Anish and Anamika where I intend
to dine one day when the pandemic is over!